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原文(作者：义和团团长)

Getting Close to Chinese Intangible Culture

Last Friday,I attended the acivity organized by our school that topic of “Getting Close to Chinese Intangible Culture” in the culture center of our city to spread the Chinese traditional culture.We learnt a lot about the culture and enjoyed the fun of the activity.

First we attended the activity about the Chinese Spring Festival,which is addicted into the Intangible Cultural Heritage of the world in 2024.We put the “Fu” and the couples on the doors,windows and walls to make the festival happier because of the color of red that means happiness and union in Chinese culture.And we also made the delicious jiaozi and If you smell it,your family will get together to celebrate this personal festival.Then we learnt Chhinese kung fu.Our hearts jumping,we started to try such a famous sport.When my body moving,I felt my soul was free,and my heart was stronger when it finished.I think everyone will like this sport.After this activity,I learnt more about my national Culture that the confidence of mmy nation was stronger.

So why don’t you get close to Chinese Intangible Cultural Heritage?Let’s try on and you will be surprised!

笑点解析

1. “which is addicted into”，错把“added”拼为“addicted”
2. “the couples”应为“couplets”，这里就成了“把夫妇贴到墙上”
3. “and union in Chinese culture.”，将团圆“reunion”拼为“union”
4. “and If you smell it,”这里应该是指闻到饺子味道，但是表达不到位
5. “Our hearts jumping”，应该使用“bumping”
6. “Culture that the confidence of mmy nation was stronger.”，我们至今不知道这个句子到底是什么从句